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Onto page 130 now. Less than 60 to go. Some quick math says that I’m 2/3 through this edit. That’s good news for the end of the edit.

I’m beginning to question how much of the plot makes sense. How much will it translate to the reader? I think I need to go back to the beginning and put some more into the front end so the decisions the characters make towards the end read right.

It is interesting to note how differently the characters behave in these later edits than they did when the first ideas were being put together. Now there is a much different dynamic between the two main characters.

Overall I’m still happy with the work, I’m just struggling to make everything flow for the reader as it flows for me. And this is where I could really use a professional